A Winter Night

Tue, 01/07/2014 - 20:22 -- Hollyb2

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Oh so cold

It makes you want to fold

The stars so bright

It gives an amazing sight

It is fun to see your breath

But makes you feel like death

What a beautiful night

Let's go in spite

And wait for the light

In this winter mite

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Maha

I love the part where it say "It is fun to see your breath, but makes you feel like death" it shows the good and the bad of Winter.Check out my poem that i wrote about Winter too. 

http://www.powerpoetry.org/poems/me-it

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