Why I Call My Females Gorgeous?

Inspiration draws in my mind as I paint her.

Mysterious yet some how I know her.

Dreaming of her image as I am indulged in my music.

I hear a whisper, I feel a tickling sensation, my lungs flood

with water as she steps in the room, and yet I don't fear what's coming next.

I pause and say to myself, I wish I could write a poem to express and describe her beauty;

but the only thing I keep jotting on the paper is gorgeous... 

Comments

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression. Always let poetry fill your life. Keep expressing your heart.  

DeMaree

You are very deep, I felt like you were talking about me.

Mafi Grey

I'm happy to know that this poem touched you the way I want it touch every woman. Sometimes we need to see the words written for us to feel it. 

bookworm1135

I love this one!! So simple and elegant. 

Mafi Grey

Thank you so much, I really appreicate that. 

powerful.imani

I love this poem it is filled with so much emotion  and has a lot of power in it.

Mafi Grey

Thank you. I just wanted to paint the best image I could. 

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