Whoever Created Us Obviously Thought We Weren't Meant to Be

Sat, 10/25/2014 - 18:09 -- kell.y

I clutch at the surface

and I think about pulling you with me

but I just want you closer,

not gone.

 

We're so different, 

you and I.

You with your cotton candy clouds,

and I, cutting across a blue diamond

as if I were one myself.

 

I clutch at the surface,

even thought I know

that I can't stay long.

 

I make my ascension

only to see you

with an excuse

that I need more air

when really, all you do

is just take my breath away.
 

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