Who I Am featuring M.V.P.

The UnderDog: What I Do,

If You Were To Find Out,

It Could Possibly Kill You!

Only Started Out Afew Months Ago,

But Now I'm Sitting Back Watching My Cash Flow.

People Screaming My Name,

One Day I Hope Acquire That Type Of Fame.

 

Right Now, You Better Know Me,

Cause One Day My Time Will Come,

Small Town Texas Kid Making Songs That Make You Go Numb.

Proud To Be From The Lone Star State,

May God Bless Texas As I Make My Way 

To The Top, Every Label Knows My Face.

 

Super Collider Call Me That,

Call Me Underdog Thats A Fact.

But I Don't Claim It All,

It Was God Who Blessed Me When I made My Fall.

Now I Rose Up, On My Way Back Trying To Tighten My Grip,

Although I May Slip.

 

Me And My Mind Left Up In A Cloud,

I Hope I Make MGK Proud.

He Writes So Clean, His Raps Are Dope,

It Was Him That Gave Me Hope.

And To All The People Who Doubted Me,

I Saw Y'all At The Show Shouting My Name,

Helping Me Increase My Gain.

 

With Gain There Is Pain,

So Don't Think I Didn't Have It Easy.

One Point  Cuts Running To My Veins 

Up And Down My Arms.

 

Lost The Only Girl That Actually Means Something To Me,

And The One Thing I Want Is To Have Her Here With Me 

Remeber When We Used Walk Around That Pond We'd 

Sit And Talk For Hours Underneath That Big Tree?

She's My Best Friend The Only One I Said I'd 

Be Happy With Til The End.

 

What I Am? More Like Who I Am.

Because If You Look At Me,

The Only Thing You'd See

Is A Small Town Texas Kid, 

Pursuing And Chasing His Dream.

 

M.V.P.:what would you do

if you were to find out 

that i rewrote history 

by not being a statistic that made it to the 3rd page of a newpaper

not fulfilling society's stereotype of a hispanic man

by the way, there is no such thing as hispanics

we are call latinos and latinas

hispanics is a word that's extraneous like the rankings in the caste system

where we are placed on the bottom of the pits

our rise above hate and racism gives society all types of fits

i'm sorry

i didn't live up to the expectation

of selling rocks on the corner

smoking weed sounding philosophically idiotic

drinking liquor on the corner

shooting up in the air

instead

my future is built on dreams

regardless of the stacks being high

there is no such thing as getting by

everything i get, i earned because it's rightfully mine

who am i?

Because If You Look At Me,

The Only Thing You'd See

is a man from the bronx

in a city that never sleeps

Pursuing And Chasing His Dream.

and more so, be the absolute best

better than anybody

 

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

whats up bro

like this poem

nice rythym to this poem

we can build off this poem

with permission, i can add a verse to compliment this piece

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

what would you do

if you were to find out 

that i rewrote history 

by not being a statistic that made it to the 3rd page of a newpaper

not fulfilling society's stereotype of a hispanic man

by the way, there is no such thing as hispanics

we are call latinos and latinas

hispanics is a word that's extraneous like the rankings in the caste system

where we are placed on the bottom of the pits

our rise above hate and racism gives society all types of fits

i'm sorry

i didn't live up to the expectation

of selling rocks on the corner

smoking weed sounding philosophically idiotic

drinking liquor on the corner

shooting up in the air

instead

my future is built on dreams

regardless of the stacks being high

there is no such thing as getting by

everything i get, i earned because it's rightfully mine

who am i?

Because If You Look At Me,

The Only Thing You'd See

is a man from the bronx

in a city that never sleeps

Pursuing And Chasing His Dream.

and more so, be the absolute best

better than anybody

 

check out the poem who am i

i combine my verse and your

take a look, what you think?

 

 

S.J. Hernandez

Another Success

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

excellent collaboration all across ..........

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