When it Rains...

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27103
United States
36° 3' 23.274" N, 80° 19' 56.8236" W

When it rains,

I am always jealous of the droplets.

The journey from the clouds,

miles above,

Cannot be the easiest one,

But they nonetheless make it down to earth

And I,

a rogue droplet in a sea of achievers,

seem to be eternally stuck in the interim,

Between start and finish.

I can’t seem to make it down to earth from my cloud.

I am jealous of the rain.

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