When

Look at what we have done to ourseles. Look at we have done to our lives. We have created an era of pain and suffering. A time when death is high and peace is low. When something wrong happen, my dad would tell me that sometime life isn't fair. Well when will it be fair? When can we live the great life that we once had? In the beginning, God once gave us a realationship with Him and it was the only thing we could ever want, but we blew it. When we fell we lost it, but thanks to Jesus, we got it back. But nothing has ever been the same. And now, centuries later, the world has turned into a corrupt place.
Money, now one of the olny things that most people care about. Murders, rising so high that it's as if there is no value for life. Abductions, rapes, wars. Most people are talking about it. Some talk about the bad things that happen, but rarely any good things. Others talk about the good things that should happen, but nothing is done about it.
People are waiting, hoping, wondering if anything that should eb done would be done. People know that there are great things that would be done, that should be done, that can be done. But one question is keeping them from happening: When? When would this happen? When should this happen? When can this happen? When!?! . . . When!?! . . . When?

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