What I Would Change


Looking around my world

as just another regular girl

One change I wish to make

That life improvement would be assured


We, as humans, learn to work

Then work to get money we earn

Then give all our money to invetions we made

When we were woking with all that we learned


So work as we may

It will not delay

Our ideas will spend all our earnings



But what if instead of inveting new ways

to spend all our earnings each and every day

We focus on NOW and all that we have

and improving the things we already mad


So instead of throwing our technologies away

Just to enjoy the fancier upgrade

Learn how to make due with what we already have

So that we could make truely better products one day



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