What are you looking at?

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What are you looking at?
Are you looking at the pain I tried so hard to hide?
The terrible sins I tried to erase daily?
Yes, I bet you see the struggles I go through,
But you do nothing but pass by and criticize, instead of lending me a hand.
Yes, I was the girl who got stomped on.
The girl that constantly got stabbed on the back!
The girl they threw inside the trashcan.
The girl that people soon forgotten.
Yes, I was the lost and confuse girl, who wanted to be found, who was tired of struggling.
Yes, look at my life, how i looked for love in all the wrong places.
Look at how desperate I was; Looking for the One, but acting like a beggar, begging for Love.yess
I was wrongly touched, and I was left empty.
I was torn, and I was left for destruction.
I was completely broken, and I was left for garbage.
Yes, I was nothing but Dirt to the world.
 
What are you looking at?
Are you looking at the pain I tried so hard to hide?
The terrible sins I tried to erase daily?
Yes, I bet you see the struggles I go through,
But, Do You See My GOD!?!
Yes, but.... Do You. Seee. My God!?!
I was garbage, and He turned me into a Diamond.
I was broken, and He made me New.
I was torn into pieces, and He made me Whole.
I was wrongly touched, and He Blessed me with His Love!
What are you looking at?
Because I am no longer My Past.
The old me is GONE
It disappeared, as soon as I accepted  Christ....into my life.
Yes, I was dirt, but now I Am HIS
 
Do you even know what that means?
My past and future sins, are taken, by His Blood.
That empty void, is filled, with His Love.
My Past struggles, are all broken, loose.
My needs, are all taken.  care of.
And His words,..ha, his words are The Hands I desperately needed to fight against the World.
So No more depression, because my Father, has taken, it ALL!
So what are you looking at?
Because I, am Free.

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