watching you sleep

i thought the beauty of girls lies on make up

their faces are real when they sleep and wake up

watching you sleep opened my mind and eyes

you were beautiful as garden full of butterflies

 

my eyes saw your beauty but my mind is curious

my feelings are true but my heart is still anxious

my words may go astray but my actions are obvious

i may be a funny guy but for this am deadly serious

 

all men at any age are visual creatures

we love women due to their lovable features

most men love the face,hips and the nipples

but am unique i fell in love with your dimples

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