Walking you Home

I walked you home

But it really felt as though

You were the one walking me

To the happiest place I could ever be

Even at times when our voices were no longer

I loved every minute of it

Because I was with you

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Comments

5 years ago

Short, sweet and simple. There's no need to use walking me twice. Suggested edit-

You were the one walking me
To the happiest place I could ever be.

Lastly; the first line of the second stanza is incomplete. ...our voices were no longer what?

5 years ago

Okie dokie, thank you! However, “even when are voices were no longer,” is complete; I was saying we were no longer talking.