A Vision Splendid

Location

Australia

A glimpse, ….

Sunray’s satin sheen on silken locks,

Sashaying girls in sleek summer frocks

 

A smile, …

A vision splendid in dappled light

Of an angel dressed in purest white

 

A nod, …

An almost undetectable gesture

beauty enhanced by virginal vesture

 

A spoken word, …

imperceptible in the distance

her presence, proof of her existence

 

Another smile, …

Is it directed at me? or

Is her day just filled with glee?

 

I rise, …

She turns and walks away

O please, I pray that she will stay.

 

I struggle, …

Hindered from getting near

The way through is not so clear

 

She turns a corner, …

a glance over her shoulder

I push through as I grow bolder

 

I arrive.... She has gone…

This poem is about: 
Me
My community

Comments

groovedwarepeople

A Vision Splendid.. How many times have we seen someone and tried to reach out to them only to find they are out of reach. The unachieveable goal that we all strive for at some time in our lives.

Nathan3259

Loved this!!

groovedwarepeople

Thanks mate, I like your message in your poem Wake Up and Rise...Never give up. Cheers

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