The Vine

Location

74731
United States
33° 52' 41.5272" N, 96° 34' 3.5868" W

The focus remains

On the unmoving woman 

With her head tilted up with joy

Her spirits raised high

As she praises the sky

Living the life which we all should

Her frozen dance

Hypnotic and alluring

With grapes drapped from her hands

Her hair flying back

Grace was not lacked

As her soul flew out of her mind

The feet unstable 

On the unmoving woman 

As she waited on tiptoe to fly

So close to the edge

Yet, nowhere near the ledge

She's dancing to prove she's alive

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