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Subtle eyes

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Piercing through layers of skin

as if it were clusters of shredded meat.

Finding the hidden closets

of the most sophisticated tales

bewildering his sadistic nature.

He becomes a thoroughbred and runs.

Strides as if meteoroids from earth

stumbled upon stars of an exuberant unknown planet.

His circumstance up for sale

no pocket change accepted cash verde only.

Truthfully this cat probably dogged his skills.

Without a moment’s peek

he seeks a peninsula residing in the form

of a submarine shadowing the intruding dark.

For, once he reaches his destination

he stamps hash tag flag sign on the playing field

wheels off into Neverland and dares

an intruder to make a move.

All the instructions in his care,

as he is the deal slinger in this game of 52,52

and simply put HE CAN’T LOSE

because the client he dealt all this to

was YOU.

 

This poem is about: 
Our world

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression. Always let poetry fill your life. Keep expressing your heart.  

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