An Unusual Dream

The oceans swallowed existence
The stars fell from the sky
Yet hovering aglow with much persistence,
And the world swam by my side

Away from all unhappiness
From any tears or worry
Surrounded by neglected loveliness
Aware of its wonder surely

We laid on rocks and listened
As God boomed words of wisdom
I had awoken from my blankets
My eyes were still so glistened

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