unfortunate boy

Location

10458
United States
40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

who will watch over this boy
as he wonders aimlessly searching for acceptance
who will protect this boy
when he is involve with goons thinking all is cool until they get caught
who will guide this boy
through rough times in his life
who will carry this boy
when he falls and wants to get up, but struggles
who will cry for this boy
when he doesn't cry anymore
who will do all these things
for this unfortunate boy
this boy he once was
for this boy that we all
once at some point
he will
he always have
he knows

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Comments

Reinanena

It's heartfelt....very true

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

very deep meaning
thank you 4 your support
check out my new poem the man i become

Reinanena

ALWAYS!!!

Hot Rod

Do not pity fools. They get themselves into these messes.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

Think u misunderstood  the message

this is about a kid looking for direction and support

there are people that been through this experience

not about pity, it's about awareness

love_anonymous

Beautiful and reminds me of a boy I know. This made my day.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

im gratefully humble that this poem made your day

read my other poems and provide feedback

i want to impact/touch lives-thank you 4 reading my poem

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