Underwater View

Tue, 04/05/2016 - 00:35 -- Morgen

From under the water

You can sometimes see the  surface

Growing closer, closer, closer

Then into air you break

Inhalation brings your lungs

Releif for long awaited intake

Because what once seemed so distant

Is finally within reach

And a thin barrier between the sun

You once again do breech.

This poem is about: 
Our world

Comments

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression. Always let poetry fill your life. Keep expressing your heart.  

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