Understanding Water

Mon, 08/11/2014 - 10:59 -- kcorrea

I never understood water, to some people it seems so free
To some people it makes then see
Who's the person they really want to be
But it doesn't make any sence to me

I look at water and just saw a beverage
Something that could give me some leverage
I look at water and see something still
As I look at it in my cup and have my fill

I look at water and see my reflection
The face looks back at me with hardly any complexion
The person behind the water is the real me
Or at least shes a person I want to be

With no blemish or crease, she seems really beautiful
In fact she look like someone quite joyfull
Is this why people like water so much?
It actually seemed like quite a hunch

I guess now I realize why waters so grand
Now I can't wait to try my next brand
I also can see how great water is to me
Because it shows who I really can be

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