Tomb tales

Upon the moonlit night I wander ever slow observing a marvelous sight only darkness can show stones so cold with stories they hold a benevolent heart smashed by wickedest of bold murder sickness suicide & drugs death discriminates not leaving their shell full of bugs as earth watches it rot tales of glory & misfortune are all that's left to be taught morbid or mindful stir commotion into pot for lives lost should never become a memory which time has forgot

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wkwc

i love this. great use of alliteration!

Rya_of_the_frozen_rain

Thank you very much I appreciate it

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