Til Death do us part

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What is he for who canno't stand

is it shallow for him to give a helping hand

death is shallow like a dark cave

it consumes all that live and wake

Are we blind when we go to rest

or see the light when at best

coldness is fear and warmth is life

so please dont turn out the light

so what is the meaning for life today

is it just random or is god here today

so whatever may happen comes to be

know this time is our enemy and always will be 

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maximus1376

This is Home grown poetry

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

thank you for sharing 

very reflective

powerful msg, keep writing 

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