Through The Unknown
Those who make it through survival and
rise above to success, and their darkest times.
They always have someone at that so called end
of the tunnel to lead them through a path
that they can't walk, as if they were handicapped.
Success can't be bought, but can be acquired through help.
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Mafi Grey
Please comment as much as you can. It motivates me to write, when i have an audience behind me. Thanks
powerful.imani
Yes this is what I needed today
because I'm going though such a hard time in life and i feel that I'm losing everything around me and my hands only have the ability to help anyone and everyone but i as myself why can't anyone return the favor .That's what I'm going though in life and this poem showed me that i can overcome it and it will make me succeed in life and be strong to stand on my own feet .
I love your poetry so happy i came to this poem
check out my poetry when you get a chance
Mafi Grey
I'm glad I was of help to you because this why us poets write, to help ourselves and others. If you need that extra hand, I and your poetry is here to help you. I was told time and after time I wouldn't be anything but trash, that I was only worth being thrown away. Yet look at me now, those words people said to me hurt but they made me stonger, now I know why people use to tell me to forgive and forget because in the long run that person is helping you. That when they might be the source of the pain, they are actually the ones who need the help the most, as they use to say to me forgive and forget and I would reach out and give that person my hand; sometimes they would smack it away and sometimes they took it. I'm always here and if you have the time I would love to do a poem with you, I just started doing that not to long ago and it's a great source of becoming better and making art. To be able to learn from one another and so much more.
MellaRaeRain_2014
That last line, though: "Success can't be bought, but can be acquired through help." That's truth, right there. We can't get through this life on our own; sometimes we need someone else to pull us through the tough spots. We aren't always strong enough to face everything alone. Really needed this right now. Thank you for sharing your talent. (:
Mafi Grey
I'm glad I could help you through any of your struggles and trails of your current life and situations that are troubling you. If you need anything else or need to talk, just shoot me an email. Shameergriffin@yahoo.com
Otherwise thank you for your comment, I wish I had more time to write but work, school, and life at the moment is keeping me pretty busy.