Thief

Tue, 04/05/2022 - 08:54 -- cm5987

The kleptomaniac dwarf

bubbled beneath the blue bonanza,

calamity sparkling in their

frivolous future.

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Lulu C

This poem is a fever dream. I mean that as both a positive note and a critique. The alliteration made it really fun to read through. It does have me questioning how you came up with something like this though. Going back to the fever dream point, I had a bit of a hard time picturing what was happening because it was so random and out there. Apart from that, I enjoyed the strange amalgamation of ideas.

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