Thief
The kleptomaniac dwarf
bubbled beneath the blue bonanza,
calamity sparkling in their
frivolous future.
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Lulu C
2 years ago
This poem is a fever dream. I mean that as both a positive note and a critique. The alliteration made it really fun to read through. It does have me questioning how you came up with something like this though. Going back to the fever dream point, I had a bit of a hard time picturing what was happening because it was so random and out there. Apart from that, I enjoyed the strange amalgamation of ideas.