Thawing Ice in Winter's Breeze - Arnold Jansen Llego

Cold is a heart without a soul 
Like a fire without a single coal 
Like us in winter, without a shoal 
Yes, Cold is a heart without a soul 

Cold is a body without a heart 
Like it's missing a part 
Like a stack glacial cart 
Yes, cold is a body without a heart 

Warm are we when were surrounded 
By love and warmth of pain being ended 
Or by a fire inside our souls that rested 
Yes, warm are wen were surrounded 

Thawed is the ice when it is warmed 
A little attention to be charmed 
Maybe it's just a little harmed 
Thawed is the ice when it is warmed 

Maybe someday, you'll open your heart to me 
And let me thaw the ice in you that I see 
Maybe someday you'll let me in 
So I can take you out of the dim

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