Thank God we're through

Thu, 09/16/2021 - 19:10 -- Wired6

Thank God we're through she thought,

The demeaning, dismissal behaviour of this "Sin" Thing  2 Her,

She can now do without.

Emotionally vindictive

And emotionally cruel 2 her.

But remember its not a man.

Its a "Sin" thing following the Yellow brick road!

©15/09/2021. Wired6.

Comments

Coeur Minuit

Wow. Some of your poems are hard to understand, but that's a poet's job really, not to lay everything out but to hop back and forth and let the reader make it out on their own.  And then there's ones like this.  !  This is poetry.

Wired6

Thank you Coeur for your comment,very much appreciated. X

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