Teacher, here me !!!

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1075 North Hairston Road Apt. 22 A Stone Mountain, Georgia, 30083
United States
33° 48' 37.8576" N, 84° 11' 31.0848" W

A shooting star casts itself through the void 

The white sprite surfs the cosmos 

Many Jupiters and Saturns are passed  

Its brilliance in lights spark ray into the skies

The Earth opens itself and accepts it radiance

Soon, the Earth and its small, gleaming fairy part ways

Sailing along the clouds to the deep dark, the luminous imp drifts away 

The world turns anew, having been graced by the small

sun that shined upon it unknown lights

 

 

Comments

jonthn_reed@yahoo.com

Cool "space" wording; I feel the same way, so I completely agree.

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