Take

Take action or give space

always making decisions in hast 

always rushing always running 

and never keeping up pace

Are you taking whats yours  ?

Or stealing whats mine?

your spending all your time confusing your mind over thoughts and decisions

that seem so unneccesary 

you take take take take 

and i give give give 

conversing about the issues 

and the relationship at stake 

seems like such a waste

what if i decided to take?

would you start giving ?

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