The System

Fri, 10/04/2013 - 13:27 -- Edie

They say that they can help me . 

That's what their here to do .

Instead they made it harder to make it one day through .

Some days my faith is strong , others the spread is far to wide .

If only they could help me to reach the other side .

The system they say has flaws not to big a deal .

But how much do those flaws really affect you .

At the end of the night you get to go home and be with someone you know .

For me the end of the night is sweet relief or a painful night alone .

They say that they can help I'm searching for a way out , but the system has little flaws like ...

Me,Myself , and I


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