surprise

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78621
United States
30° 20' 35.178" N, 97° 22' 23.7576" W

woke up feeling bad
got up, then had to run
the sight was so sad
wanted help but none will come

finally, it stopped
but worry did not
ripping, dripping,
waiting, hoping

wanting red, any red
but no, blue, its blue
two lines, same hue
not one but two

so its true, horribly true
shocking
even though i knew
I can almost hear the mocking
because I'm 16 and pregnant

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