Sunset Tongue Twister

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The sun sets slowly over settled sparkling sea shores

Soul mates sit side by side so sweet, so solemnly sentimental

Swans swim somewhere near, struck by silent starry skies

Stereos sound sincerely stealing souls of the spirited while sparks soar, simmering and sizzling

Simply smiling seldom snatches sorrow and springs strong satisfaction

Comments

RSharp14

I love the emotion that comes along with imagining the very poem itself. You can just envision the moment that a couple sits together by the ocean shore hand in hand wishing that life would just pause for a moment and they could live that way forever.

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