Sunbathed Success

You know how you feel a spirit before you walk into a room
Or you get the bigger picture before you even zoom
I swear it was chance happenings
Big imagination, but things happen you were never imagining 
Connections with people,it feels like constellations 
Stars helpings stars so far vernacular spectacular bars keep up the duration 
Imagine all the entrepreneurs you could get together to create a business oriented nation
Living in a generation where B.O.S.S stands for better off selling salt
See your influence influenced a different type of money on the minds of minors fresh new vaults 
We all make changes,sometimes we cross the line causing earthquakes and must admit it's our fault
But meeting the right people doesn't make you do better but maybe something about them makes you exalt
Sometimes the sun doesn't shine for people 
Sky scrappers scrapping people's blue skies leaving them with scars and cries but you're like a construction worker breaking down steeples
And you're like the bucket of water that kept Jack and Jill trudging up the steep hill
When you spit words of wisdom
It's like our heads have built in hereditary bucket hats catching it,such a caste system
It's like you went fishing for greatness and when you cast you didn't miss em
And our paths crossing can't be a coincidence 
Because on this yellow brick road I've been on with very little luck you're like a missing ruby off of Dorothy's shoes you're serendipitous  
And when the sun doesn't shine
You're like the bit of light that can make a tree out a vine
Sometimes my discouragement held me confined
But somewhere along my road you were another green light that caught my sight before the stop sign

This poem is about: 
My community

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S.zaynab.k

There's word play and fantastic phrasing in this awesome poem. Enjoyed reading. Kudos.

 

. pls do review my latest poem too, I'm quite new here but have been writing elsewhere for ages and readers say they get messages for life from my poems. So pls add your thoughts under it.

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