Sugar Sweet Love

Location

37013
United States
36° 3' 33.3648" N, 86° 40' 14.1888" W

I Have This sugar covered Candy,
Sweet, delicious, and slowly melts away,
Spec by Spec of sugar overwhelms me,
speechless, wreckless needless to say,

"Mmmmh," You Are the sweeTess sweetNess,

If I have ever lost its because of you,
You Found me hiding from you, my weakness,
As another spec comes Off I Get closer To do,

To Do The Action of my words, "I Love You,"
Candles, a light dinner, conversations, heartbeats,
All from lying under the stars and wondering whys',
Those memories that we are creating, sweeping feet,

To stand in the Rain, spontaneous kiss under thundering Skies,
Eyes Never Lost sight Of each other, beginning, middle, end,
It was Love at First, second and third sight, After years of wait,
Pondering when Love came about for our soul at mend,

Was it The First, Second or even the third day and nights of our dates?
Did I Mention I wrote in a journal every step of the way,
You never saw it, no one did, It was always secret to me,
It's a memory in case I ever lost you in our long intimate days,

Knowing that I would never settle for any one other than my beauty,
You'd Never starve I Promise I can be your personal cook,
you'd never work to hard, we won't work our passion is to love,
And That Journal I Mentiond, "yes..." That's "The Notebook,"

Even When You are not here I write about how I can never get enough,
Your eyes as bright as the stars we visioned laying down,
Your skin as soft as the wet sand the ocean Rubs in bliss,
Your personality that conveys my conscious to be found--

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