Submarine

Your caress is a guiding light
A brilliant star in the charcoal night
We are the epitome of synergy
Miracles hold no candle to you and me

I was so clueless, so naive
Until you ignited a spark of magic
The spark that made me believe
In love and all of its tricks

Worlds may pass and years twirl by
Yet I'd be nowhere but in your arms
This novel bliss just can't die
When everything good in life it affirms

There are places to see and things to do
I have so much to give
But I'm writing a mushy poem about you
And stringing together adjectives

So use your most advanced submarine
To scope the ocean blue
But you'll never find the bottom
Of my endless love for you

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