Strive With Effort

Thu, 05/02/2013 - 12:15 -- Tyshirk

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23608
United States
37° 9' 15.1092" N, 76° 32' 14.1468" W

Pay attention to flustered harmony.
Falling hard, drifting away from your goal;
It’s an unfortunate, sad symphony.
Given a push, get up, and learn your role.

Understanding limits is where you start.
You won’t hurt, cry, whine; all to become strong.
The quest will pull you completely apart,
But in the end, you will know right from wrong.

The path you take is just a long journey;
Which leads you blindly into the fire?
Countless adventures reveal destiny,
You follow the quote that will inspire;

When this big world shoves you with its attack,
You stand your ground, step forward, and shove back.

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