Sparkle

Across the room I see her
Her eyes, like oceans, wide
The deepest blue, and stormy,
find me: I cannot hide
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She is one quite familiar
How oft I've longed before
To capture her affection:
To open her heart's door
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I've tried, yet failed the courage
To speak to her out-right.
I follow from a distance,
While keeping her in sight
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They draw me in; I'm taken
A pris'ner of their will
Demanding full surrender:
They move, I follow still
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Am I somehow mistaken:
Was it her eyes I met?
Turn away, then back again
To gaze on this coquette.
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Her pale white skin is flawless
Youth's blush upon her cheek
Gentle lines surround her lips
Increasing her mystique
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It's cat and mouse. Steal a glance;
Resume the task at hand.
Ignore my rising, fluttered heart
It's flame now fiercely fanned
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She looks again, away, now back
I swim into her eyes
So deep, these waters, deep!
Uncharted. What do they disguise?
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First I see it, slight, then full
A sparkle lights her eyes
This radiant light moves rapidly
Like lightning in the skies
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I'm warmed, assured, ecstatic
Her sparkle draws a grin
I nod and then wave awkwardly
Exuberant within
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© Copywritten by David C Rogers 2018
by David C Rogers
11/3/2018

This poem is about: 
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Comments

S.zaynab.k

Ok read this too, powerful and fiery as you express the attraction and how she has you enamoured. I laughed at 'coquette ' how you rhymed that in was clever like the rest of your rhyming. Ok kudos again for this sensational poem.

upnorthdavid

Thanks! I often try to incorporate older words into my poems. They have a beauty all their own, and can expand vocabulary for a reader.

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Very interesting poem, hope you continue to share your verse! 

savigirl14

I love all the details you put into this poem, so that i can picture it in my mind. Just returning the favor for all the poems of mine that you read

 

upnorthdavid

Savigirl14,
I really appreciate your kind words, I have been writing quite a bit and posting. Would love to share some poems if you would like to read!

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