Space Cruisin'

Standing out front of red river, rolls in hand. I could see her pull up from where I stand. The car was beautiful and the girl even more. I felt glorious sensations from just opening the door. It was a spaceship that was about to lift off for a trip. As she stepped on the throttle I could hear the engine rip. As we drove out of there, I found the ride was nothing but nice. The handling was excellent and the steering, precise. We picked up her louis vuittons, they were green and round. I wanted it so bad I could feel my heart pound. Realizing the feeling all I could hear was this sound. From the back of my ears were some subwoofers I found. I was delighted to know she had some bump in her trunk. It would make the trip easier for me to break down my funk. We entered valley dairy so I could purchase some juice. I asked for some cigarettes but the man refused. I didn't have my I.D so what should I do. Then the man stopped me and said "hey I remember you". He sold me the cigs and I said thank you very much. I thought "how lucky am I on a night as such". It was nearing ten and that's when we decided to pop em'. From our fingers they fell and ten o five is when we dropped em'. I said "let's take a cruise and by the end we'll be rolling". Ten miles on the cruise and my mind started folding. She said she had to puke so she decided to pull over. On highway 2 we pulled over on top of the shoulder. I asked if I could drive and she said "do you really want to?" I said hell yeah and wondered if she had even puked. She broke it down to me that she didn't let anyone drive it dude. I got really anxious and before I took off she said but I trust you. The car was more impressive than I could've ever imagined. Not to mention the sounds of daft punk were just screaming and slammin. I put my seatbelt on and I found comfort with it around my chest. How fast does this bitch go, can I give it a test? She said yeah but it isn't that fast. Butterflies flew up my stomach as the RPM's passed. I took it up to sixty and slowed down right away. Man if I owned this car I'd be driving it all day. I must of gotten ahead of myself cause I scraped the tires. Luckily nothing rubbed off, you couldn't see any wires. Nearing the end she couldn't believe we were in EGF. She must of been rollin' hard off that pill called X. We quick met up with her mom so she could check in. I stepped out of the car with a jolly ass grin. They talked for a bit, her mom was legit. She turned around so I flicked the rest of my cigarette. I looked at her with a smile and asked are we rollin'? Out of nowhere her mom looks at me and says "oh yeah, you're rollin'. Haha, I let go and started singing rollin', rollin', rollin', I was too fucked up. Laughing about the thought caused my brain to get stuck. She told me that her mom's totally anti drug. If that's the truth then I guess I feel like I'm a motha fuckin thug. Her mom knew the truth the whole time we were there. She let her daughter go so she must not of cared. We were just a couple of kids, rollin' not causing any harm. That's gotta be the reason, either that or my sweet charm. All I could remember from that night were my eyes twitchin, the subs hittin and disformed roads caused by my current situation. It was a cartoon world of three different dimensions. The cruise seemed forever but it was only two hours long. The whole night was a smash of confusion cause those rolls were the bomb.

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