Sonnet 93 Remix

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48381
United States
42° 35' 28.8312" N, 83° 36' 0.684" W


So shall I live, supposing thou art true,

I don’t wanna be fooled

Into falling in love with you

It seems like we were just getting to know one another so well

That in thy face sweet love should ever dwell;

For there can live no hatred in thine eye,

Hello always means goodbye

So babe

 

I won’t stop telling you everyday how much I need you around

I know you’re up in the sky but I don’t know when you’ll be back down

I wake up looking for you but I guess it depends on the day

Writ in moods, frowns and wrinkles strange,

Is it hello or goodbye?


How like Eve's apple doth thy beauty grow,

if thy sweet virtue answer not thy show!

I been gone for a while

I can see the same story in her eyes

I’m like, the sun better learn to shine, I’m feeling blind

Will you stay for a while?

Thy looks should nothing thence but sweetness tell.

 

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