somewhere i can see you again

you know i looked at all the tears within the sentimental years lost with a beer ive tried,

stuck talking to the moon trying not to consume more of the way i feel inside,

im sitting at the bar trying to forget to remember my heart trying not to fall apart but ive cried,

hung up on a memory or simply something ment to be i cant help but rememninse on how you were mine,

these bottles become blurry as im lost within the worry and time begins to spin,

i begin to fall yet lost within it all i hit my head unconcious and i can see u again,

the heaven lights were shinng all in good timing showing me back when,

i could smile  and you stayed a while but it was just ud then,

but i opened my eyes being yet another drunk to critize not knowing where i am,

there was flowers next to my bed with a card as i read i couldnt seem to understand,

it turns out that i was five years over stuck in a coma and she was with another man,

so i close my eyes wishing it was all lies and i was somewhere i could see you again.

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