Some times i feel like

Some times i feel like soaking in the rain,

so it can wash away the pain,

wash away the memories,

wash away the history,

the evil inside of of me,

the greed the envy,

Cleanse me,

open up my eyes

so that i realize

whats really important,

other than

money,

music,

sex,

drugs,

violence,

fame,

times i feel as if I'm going insane

worrying bout materialistics

instead of living my life.

instead i live in my head.

worrying about what others have said.

allowing the past to hold me back.

I hope that the rain can change 

even the most insane nerve in my brain

 

 

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