Smoke in your lungs

the smoke from, 
          your mouth 
blown into the wind,
      soaks up all my oxygen 
moaning for air,
   your lips touch mine 
my lung rips,
     so this is a sign 
you seem to, 
be killing deep down inside 
the gentle heart,
   that you broke apart
and now we seem, 
to be only killing each other 
slowly inside to make, 
our hearts feel alive 

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