Smoke it angles past my&

Smoke it angles past my 

face it wanders through my 

lungs it burns me turns my 

stomach

You dont understand no

Not you I say not you

The walls press in on me 

The smoke is choking

Burning me

From the inside out

It's burning me

You dont understand no

Not you not you

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