The Rock

Location

Bro lets hit the rock!

The beach, where I truly feel free

Its the only place I really want to be

I'd rather not be anywhere else

Anywhere else just isnt the same

Anywhere else is completely and utterly lame

 

Pryarmid rock is my beach of choice

The warm sun

Perfect waves

The Sand between my toes

I wish I was there right now

 

But until I get the chance to go

The slight feeling of emptiness will stay

When will i be there again?

Oh wait, Im going tomorrow!

 

 

 

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