River of Life

Powerful streams take
you as their willing victim
Stay above water

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Skam2221

11 years ago

A haiku that fell into my head on a lazy Saturday afternoon.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

10 years ago

this is catchy

but is missing something

it needs a body in this poem that captivates the readers

i would add more stanzas or verses to really juice up this poem

the 1st two lines grab my attention and then it ends

add more lines to it

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