Rise of the morning star.

Rise of the morning star,
again searching for lost hope,
dreaming in love that hurts,
enduring to make them smile
at a cost you cant afford
and clearly the worlds cruelity
weighs them to depression ...
Coz wishes keeps them going,
praying is no more a tool...
loans with high interest returns ,
yoking and slavering the young,
but do i say ,
Its a jungle where the wise survive .
the swift cant make it
In this race it aint carnal
I cant wait when the rising of the sun
Comes with joy and hope
and love that was laid back in Eden😎.

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