right beneath the stars

Fri, 01/18/2019 - 23:49 -- thyreez

Regardless of how far we are

our love for each other will always be on par

although we never met face to face

when it comes to you my heart will always be up for the chase

how lucky i was to ever meet you

I fell in love,caught it like the common flu

your blue eyes made me feel astonished

knowing all the bad has been demolished

hugging my pillow thinking of you all the time

loving you so much it should be a crime

so until then i know we shall meet

cause for your love id never admit defeat

 

me and you both laying in a park

right near the brown tree bark

the place being dimly lit by stars

there for hours, staring at the sky afar

both our hands together in harmony

the next best thing to a romantic oddysey

and for awhile time seems to freeze

all you feel is a divine breeze

slowly our lips come closer and closer

hearts neating like a wild rollercoaster

we finally kiss and time is back

so caught up that we lost track

we end the night on a high note

as we leave the park and i give you my coat.

 

 

 

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

S.zaynab.k

Awesomely rhymed romantic perhaps  long distance love poem .  Dreamy and very poetic, starry and superb word choice. Sensational to read . Kudos.

I see comments are not common here, but interaction is good for the human touch in this cold world.  Pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too.

thyreez

honestly thank you for such kind words, yes it is long distance, im glad that you found

it to be sensational,and id love to and will be honoured to review your poetry(i rarely 

try such a thing out but im glad someone actually calls my poem such high words)

 

thank you

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