Revolving Doors

Location

30303
United States
33° 45' 20.5596" N, 84° 23' 18.1392" W

Our love is nothing but a circle,
a repeated cycle
of hidden passions and subtle attraction.
The line drawn in the sand
meant to separate lovers and friends,
we’ve crossed it,
drew a new,
and we’ve crossed it again.
We end where we begin.
We begin where we end.
And we’ve crossed it again,
drew a new,
we’ve crossed it.
Meant to separate lovers and friends,
the line drawn in the sand.
The hidden passions and subtle attraction,
a repeated cycle;
Our love is nothing but a circle.

Comments

Jes2169392

I really like this Poem. I feel as so many people could surely relate to it with the similar relationships that feel as if one is going nowhere.

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