A Response: Chocolate Hair and Onyx brown Eyes


Bear… Ever since we met,

I fell in love with your neat brown hair and kind brown eyes.

Your laugh, oh how I love your laugh, along with

Your never ending kindness

Thank you for being there for me.


Who says I am the only one with imagination

Together we have formulated ideas

and impacted so many people

So just as much as the imagination belongs to you.

Let’s bring this world to a new age of happiness.



You keep saying that your soul is black

But who says black is bad

Without darkness

We can never appreciate the light

If I am the sunshine

Will you forever be my nightsky?




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