Redamancy

 

If you could ask me what I would want from you, maybe it would sound like this:

I want you to love me fully and unequivocally. 

Strip me down from the insides out, with my heart bare and my desires open to you. 

I want to feel your fingertips glide, searing my skin.

Tracing every pigment and bone.  

Make me forget, wreathe me in smiles.

And I promise I'll eat the six pomegranate seeds temptation gave me if that's what it takes for me to stay with you.

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