the red sky

oh the sky 

the red, red sky 

i see the fear,

the pain in your eyes

oh the red, the red red earth.

bathed in blood

bodies lay in the dirt. 

oh the red. 

the red, red sea 

many sailors graves

are hidden in her deep 



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