"Raw"

Some day,

One day,

I hope war will end.

 

One day,

I hope,

The death of the innocent will cease.

 

And war,

Spelled backwards

Is “raw.”

 

Raw feelings,

Raw emotions.

Real beings,

Real devotion.

 

These raw wars

Should end eventually

Because,

In reality,

These wars don’t solve anything.

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