Pounding Love

im sorry for not enough time to be dedicated
you're the one
i should take in account
dont think im careless, you know i appreciated
all the bits and fits you've given in amount

ive resurrected
a whole new me i am now starting to accept it
the old me is now defected
my dirty soul now is cleansed im dissected

forgive me please
dont leave me ill appease
Dear judge i plead Guilty
sure you done wrong
but im the one whose truly filthy

you know you're your mine
you know im yours
without you my life is at breaking point remorse

let be clean
too much love
too fat?
dont worry ill take some lipozene
just dont leave me my love
your my wonder love

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