a poem to a girl

I'd spend every second with you, why?

because i love you

I'd work the worst jobs in the world for you, why?

because i love you

If needed i'd die for you, why?

because i love you

I'd spend years apart from you, why?

because you hate me

This poem is about: 
Me
Poetry Terms Demonstrated: 
Epistrophe

Comments

coltonbahr

7 years ago

I wrote this poem because I'm currently in a long distance relationship and it feels like every choice I make is in a sense because I wanna make her proud of me. I added the last part to be punny not because she hates me if you were worried.

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